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2025.02.10 ~ 2025.06.29
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开始:2025-02-10

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By 一一 05-14 31次浏览 课时83

The original sentences have minor issues with redundancy, vague phrasing, and structure. Revised: Diabetes mellitus is a major modifiable risk factor for atherosclerotic cardiovascular disease (ASCVD), congestive heart failure (CHF), and mortality, associated with a 15% increased mortality risk compared to non-d iabetic individuals. This post hoc analysis aimed to compare associations between adiposity measures and clini cal outcomes in individuals with type 2 diabetes. 

2.Effective sentences from academic papers and writing tips: Effective sentences:①Hypothesis framing: "We hypothesize that sustained hyperglycemia exacerbates endothelial dysfunction via oxidative stress pathways."②Method clarity: "Data were analyzed using Cox proportional hazards models, adjusted for age, sex, and baseline BMI."

Tips for academic writing:①Use active voice where appropriate (eg: we observed vs. it was observed).②Avoid nominalizations: Write analyzed instead of conducted an analysis of.③Limit jargon: Define acronyms (eg: ASCVD) at first use and avoid non-essential abbreviations

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